01-25-2015, 03:36 AM
Hi,
i think it's a good attempt at slam poetry,it worked in my mind,
i think you could have stretched it out and gave it a bit more grit by
naming a few names and laying into them with perhaps a few expletives,
overall not bad at all,
Tom.
i think it's a good attempt at slam poetry,it worked in my mind,
i think you could have stretched it out and gave it a bit more grit by
naming a few names and laying into them with perhaps a few expletives,
overall not bad at all,
Tom.