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01-25-2015, 12:11 AM

(01-22-2015, 05:57 AM)Erthona Wrote: Turtle

My daughter’s male turtle spends
the day trying to escape the tank.
How typical!

–Erthona

©2015

You could condense it to something along the lines of

My male turtle
relentlessly attempts escape.
How typical!

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Turtle - by Erthona - 01-22-2015, 05:57 AM

RE: Turtle - by Brownlie - 01-22-2015, 12:18 PM

RE: Turtle - by Erthona - 01-22-2015, 12:56 PM

RE: Turtle - by srijantje - 01-22-2015, 01:48 PM

RE: Turtle - by Erthona - 01-22-2015, 01:51 PM

RE: Turtle - by ellajam - 01-25-2015, 12:11 AM

RE: Turtle - by bena - 01-25-2015, 01:22 AM

RE: Turtle - by Erthona - 01-25-2015, 01:55 PM

RE: Turtle - by RiverNotch - 01-27-2015, 02:30 AM

RE: Turtle - by srijantje - 01-27-2015, 01:05 PM

RE: Turtle - by Erthona - 01-27-2015, 06:52 PM

RE: Turtle - by srijantje - 01-28-2015, 12:06 AM

RE: Turtle - by monmac - 02-01-2015, 05:46 PM

RE: Turtle - by RiverNotch - 02-02-2015, 12:28 AM

RE: Turtle - by ellajam - 02-02-2015, 12:43 AM

RE: Turtle - by Erthona - 02-03-2015, 10:48 AM

RE: Turtle - by rayheinrich - 02-04-2015, 06:40 PM

RE: Turtle - by ellajam - 02-04-2015, 07:07 PM

RE: Turtle - by Erthona - 02-06-2015, 05:28 AM

RE: Turtle - by rayheinrich - 02-06-2015, 04:49 PM

RE: Turtle - by bena - 02-06-2015, 09:46 PM

RE: Turtle - by Erthona - 02-07-2015, 03:43 AM

RE: Turtle - by bena - 02-07-2015, 06:13 AM

RE: Turtle - by rayheinrich - 02-07-2015, 12:06 PM

RE: Turtle - by Erthona - 02-07-2015, 04:08 PM

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