01-21-2015, 11:09 PM
Mark, thanks for doing that. I have updated the link and checked to make sure it was operational this time 
Sorry srijantje, yes it was "hemp oil" or the equivalent. It was medical grade cannabis oil.
Thanks AJ. Yes, this was never meant to be much of a poem, mainly just a way to inform about the story. It was a write once and post sort of thing, I never even realized about the repetition of the word "pain" until you pointed it out. As mark said, "Thanks for bringing this story to my attention and in that sense your poem has done it's job." That's all I could ask for.
Thanks again for giving it a read,
Dale
Sorry srijantje, yes it was "hemp oil" or the equivalent. It was medical grade cannabis oil.
Thanks AJ. Yes, this was never meant to be much of a poem, mainly just a way to inform about the story. It was a write once and post sort of thing, I never even realized about the repetition of the word "pain" until you pointed it out. As mark said, "Thanks for bringing this story to my attention and in that sense your poem has done it's job." That's all I could ask for.
Thanks again for giving it a read,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.