Braced
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I don't like the first line, or the ellipses. But the rest is a fine poem.
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Braced - by Tiger the Lion - 01-19-2015, 11:31 AM
RE: Braced - by just mercedes - 01-19-2015, 12:05 PM
RE: Braced - by Tiger the Lion - 01-20-2015, 01:30 AM
RE: Braced - by ellajam - 01-20-2015, 02:46 AM
RE: Braced - by Erthona - 01-20-2015, 04:11 AM



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