01-16-2015, 02:52 AM
Sorry, I forgot that was up there. I looked but somehow missed it. I have not gone over this poem in over two years since I posted it. Yes, looking at that I agree, not necessarily because of the musical reference (I'm not sure "Mary has a little Lamb" the original not the Stevie Ray Vaughn one is really a musical reference) it is however overdone and needs trimming. That's a good catch, thank you.
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.