Sonnet Rewrite
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Warrior

His wife, as thin and tensioned as a wire,
gets woozy when the needles puncture him.
She jerks and leaves, her spine a rod of ire,
because I touched his tubes. Her mouth went grim;
now, pacing in the hall, she looks for aid
from anyone professionally trained.
Her anguished face is angled like a blade;
her whole demeanor timid rage restrained.
How can I tell her now about the past?
I taught him what I know of Bushido:
in face of fear to hold his courage fast,
to choose where love and loyalty should go.
He was my student; now he's teaching me
That faithfulness can be our enemy.
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Sonnet Rewrite - by Leah S. - 01-15-2015, 04:35 AM
RE: Sonnet Rewrite - by tectak - 01-15-2015, 05:06 AM
RE: Sonnet Rewrite - by Brownlie - 01-15-2015, 05:18 AM
RE: Sonnet Rewrite - by Leah S. - 01-16-2015, 01:26 AM
RE: Sonnet Rewrite - by ellajam - 05-01-2015, 05:13 AM
RE: Sonnet Rewrite - by Mark101 - 05-11-2015, 10:41 PM



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