01-15-2015, 02:29 AM
Thanks Mel. More recently than I'd like to admit my punctuation was worse. 
- Sometimes non-existent. I would assume the reader could conjure it themselves. My problem now is that I second guess the punctuation too much and it can become subsequently worse with each tweak. I'm going to strip this one down a little - hopefully not too much.
Appreciate your thoughts,
Paul
- Sometimes non-existent. I would assume the reader could conjure it themselves. My problem now is that I second guess the punctuation too much and it can become subsequently worse with each tweak. I'm going to strip this one down a little - hopefully not too much.Appreciate your thoughts,
Paul