01-14-2015, 10:33 AM
"Sorry I thought this was in the "Newly Registered Forum," I didn't see it was in the "fun forum". Please disregard the above."
This is Dale's comprehension of levity and throwing back at you. Can you comprehend sarcasm?
As to the poem itself---
the meter in L3 & 4 were screwed...ella was right about that.
as to the 'fin' I love that since I'm a huge fan of entendre and caught the fish thing.
Welcome to the site. I would suggest in the future to try not to be quite so defensive---it helps to have a very thick skin, and if you have to explain your poetry, you've not connected with your audience.
Cheers!
bena
This is Dale's comprehension of levity and throwing back at you. Can you comprehend sarcasm?
As to the poem itself---
the meter in L3 & 4 were screwed...ella was right about that.
as to the 'fin' I love that since I'm a huge fan of entendre and caught the fish thing.
Welcome to the site. I would suggest in the future to try not to be quite so defensive---it helps to have a very thick skin, and if you have to explain your poetry, you've not connected with your audience.
Cheers!
bena