01-14-2015, 03:45 AM
Kubla Khan,
Ah, I have never seen a poem write another poem before, unless you are a son of a barbarian and then your name would be spelled wrong. Nope, definitely a poem. Evidently you have been reading poems of the Romantics. "Rill" was one of their favorite words. "Rill" becoming more archaic every day. Used either as affectation or in imitation of the Romantics, neither probably a good reason for its usage. Really the only thing you are missing is the invocation of the muse.
Poems are legitimately center justified for only concrete or shape poems. The only other use it has is in poor rhyming poetry bound in a fancy book to rest on old ladies' (who know nothing about poetry) coffee tables...well, and Hallmark cards which are really more rhyme than poem.
Oooh, the fancy French film ending "fin". Please never use that again as this is neither a film or a Mexican soap opera. It does act as the last line rejoinder in Romantic poetry, but this poem hardly warrants that.
Sorry I thought this was in the "Newly Registered Forum," I didn't see it was in the "fun forum". Please disregard the above.
Welcome to the site,
Dale
Ah, I have never seen a poem write another poem before, unless you are a son of a barbarian and then your name would be spelled wrong. Nope, definitely a poem. Evidently you have been reading poems of the Romantics. "Rill" was one of their favorite words. "Rill" becoming more archaic every day. Used either as affectation or in imitation of the Romantics, neither probably a good reason for its usage. Really the only thing you are missing is the invocation of the muse.
Poems are legitimately center justified for only concrete or shape poems. The only other use it has is in poor rhyming poetry bound in a fancy book to rest on old ladies' (who know nothing about poetry) coffee tables...well, and Hallmark cards which are really more rhyme than poem.
Oooh, the fancy French film ending "fin". Please never use that again as this is neither a film or a Mexican soap opera. It does act as the last line rejoinder in Romantic poetry, but this poem hardly warrants that.
Sorry I thought this was in the "Newly Registered Forum," I didn't see it was in the "fun forum". Please disregard the above.
Welcome to the site,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.