Grapevine/ Change by Revelation
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Since they're both pretty short I added two. I contrived both of these last night. Both throwaway poems. I have a hard time conveying a message and adhering to a rhyme scheme. Behold the lackluster.

Grapevine

Give no heed to the grapevine
Always ripe with meddlesome conceits,
Base fruits to dine,
And empty savors sweet.


Change by Revelation

Our old wonts do shift slow
Though their beaten paths often lead to woe.
Our assails to alter our wayward trails
By the same hand sink from the travails,
And so we our worn grooves follow, sans intention,
Lest we transcend our fetters in revelation.
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Grapevine/ Change by Revelation - by Kubla Khan - 01-14-2015, 12:19 AM
RE: Grapevine/ Change by Revelation - by Brownlie - 01-14-2015, 01:03 AM



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