Wild Life
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(01-06-2015, 01:17 AM)71degrees Wrote:  Late
last night
a woman
was heard
screaming
at the thin
moon.light

In
an alley
behind
a distant house,
a chained
dog strained
to join
her.
See bolded.. not much of a poem here. Not much of a crit either but that is all I got.
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Wild Life - by 71degrees - 01-06-2015, 01:17 AM
RE: Wild Life - by tectak - 01-09-2015, 07:29 AM
RE: Wild Life - by 71degrees - 01-09-2015, 11:50 AM
RE: Wild Life - by ChristopherSea - 01-09-2015, 07:29 AM
RE: Wild Life - by somnium - 01-11-2015, 08:02 PM
RE: Wild Life - by Mark D. Windmill - 01-14-2015, 01:10 PM
RE: Wild Life - by 71degrees - 01-24-2015, 02:03 AM



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