01-09-2015, 07:29 AM
(01-06-2015, 01:17 AM)71degrees Wrote: LateHi 71,
last night
a woman
was heard
screaming
at the thin
moon.
In
an alley
behind
a distant house,
a chained
dog strained
to join
her.
This may languish. Perhaps it should.
Thing is, linguine verse just doesn't seem to cut it anymore...you see, we all KNOW that this is just two Iines split up into silly blocks.
Crit?
Oh,
is that
all
t
h
e
r
e
is?
You can't fool me...want it transferred to Short form? Just say the word.
Best,
tectak