Killer Riff In A Flat

[Magpie]

neighbours -
crushed
by the big fat heavy bassline

Nice one. Poor neighbours! Sounds fatter to me without "the" in L3.

Gibson wails
worried neighbour
calls 911

Paul

Paul,
thanks for reading, I agree with your suggestion of dropping "the"...
I'm also liking your 'ku and if you were to give it a title I would suggest "Cry Baby" as a reference to the Dunlop 'Cry Baby' Wah pedal that Hendrix made famous by utilising so brilliantly in the 60's.

Thanks for reading,

Mark