01-07-2015, 02:08 PM
Tom,
You realize, don't you, that this is a satire? It is not suppose to be good, it is suppose to mimic a certain type of writer, or rather point out certain habits of a certain group of writers with which I think you are familiar. The "my-may" is a good catch, it was not intended, the rest of the errors were intended. I rather thought "dent" was a stroke of genius, that and "dashen'". The "High Notes" being a metaphor for the common mistakes that seem to repeat for these heart-on-the-sleeve troubadours. The intent on my part was for it to be humorous. Evidently that did not succeed as no one found it overwhelmingly humorous...well, except for me.
Dale the non-humorous
Say goodnight George. Goodnight George.
You realize, don't you, that this is a satire? It is not suppose to be good, it is suppose to mimic a certain type of writer, or rather point out certain habits of a certain group of writers with which I think you are familiar. The "my-may" is a good catch, it was not intended, the rest of the errors were intended. I rather thought "dent" was a stroke of genius, that and "dashen'". The "High Notes" being a metaphor for the common mistakes that seem to repeat for these heart-on-the-sleeve troubadours. The intent on my part was for it to be humorous. Evidently that did not succeed as no one found it overwhelmingly humorous...well, except for me.
Dale the non-humorous
Say goodnight George. Goodnight George.
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.