01-04-2015, 10:50 AM
I love the concept of your 'ku but I think the first line lets it down - it doesn't give me an image, as the others do. Maybe something like 'hitchhiker'?
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Haiku revisited - by Leah S. - 01-04-2015, 02:56 AM
RE: Haiku revisited - by just mercedes - 01-04-2015, 10:50 AM
RE: Haiku revisited - by zahrakh - 01-04-2015, 02:36 PM
RE: Haiku revisited - by jaybee - 01-04-2015, 02:39 PM
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RE: Haiku revisited - by srijantje - 01-05-2015, 12:22 AM
RE: Haiku revisited - by Magpie - 01-05-2015, 01:33 AM
RE: Haiku revisited - by Leah S. - 01-15-2015, 05:01 AM
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