01-03-2015, 04:47 PM
Thank you so much shootthestar, that was really helpful.
Smudged on the horizon,
beneath the uncaring gray clouds,
farewell of the year.
I chose a period here, how does it look now?
And you are right about the line that feels heavy, I'll do something about it.
Smudged on the horizon,
beneath the uncaring gray clouds,
farewell of the year.
I chose a period here, how does it look now?
And you are right about the line that feels heavy, I'll do something about it.