Love poetry Edit 2.0 leah S., erthona,mercedes, none

[StanleyZ]

I find that bereaved, and bereft are pretty much exactly the same... The anaphora is totally acceptable in this position, but I must ask, is it worth saying the same word in two different ways, or do you think something else would appease in this intrusion of common thought? It comes down to the yield of readers that sway one way or another... That is sort of a revelation, and I doubt there is getting around it no matter what words you write...