01-02-2015, 01:22 PM
I like it, I do not critique well and prefer the author's orignal work most often.. A true reflection. I like how you captured yourself as a vessel of creation when you said ''your sown seeds in the garden of me''. It sounds almost like an Xtasy trip. I have never made love on shrooms, as i assume you made love. Very sensual piece, and quite expressive and also bold.

