One Night in Wales
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I like it, I do not critique well and prefer the author's orignal work most often.. A true reflection. I like how you captured yourself as a vessel of creation when you said ''your sown seeds in the garden of me''. It sounds almost like an Xtasy trip. I have never made love on shrooms, as i assume you made love. Very sensual piece, and quite expressive and also bold.
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One Night in Wales - by Universalchild - 12-30-2014, 05:29 AM
RE: One Night in Wales - by somnium - 01-02-2015, 01:22 PM
RE: One Night in Wales - by 71degrees - 01-03-2015, 01:33 AM
RE: One Night in Wales - by Erthona - 01-09-2015, 08:12 AM
RE: One Night in Wales - by Universalchild - 05-06-2016, 06:13 PM
RE: One Night in Wales - by bena - 01-09-2015, 10:11 AM
RE: One Night in Wales - by Rustymetal - 01-28-2015, 06:33 PM
RE: One Night in Wales - by februarious - 02-06-2015, 09:27 AM



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