01-01-2015, 02:37 PM
Thanks Brownlie,
I'll take that under advisement. After looking at it, I realize that I do need a comma in line 6 after it, and maybe add "alien" before civilization.
Thanks for the pointers
Dale
PS Yes the "I thought" comment is spot on. Will remove the first one. Thanks again Dale.
I'll take that under advisement. After looking at it, I realize that I do need a comma in line 6 after it, and maybe add "alien" before civilization.
Thanks for the pointers
Dale
PS Yes the "I thought" comment is spot on. Will remove the first one. Thanks again Dale.
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.