12-29-2014, 06:14 PM
(12-29-2014, 01:33 PM)71degrees Wrote: We leave one step at a time:I felt the end sort of tailed off - I'd like to see some return to the title. Thanks for posting.
from the table after eating, a failing job, something about 'from' bothers me
certain beliefs, the broken heart of a home 'broken heart' feels a bit tired
the in-and-out of our breath,
one hand against cold glass I like this image
from the black rocks near Calumet,
green frothy water breaking I like the contrast with the glass
over them, and that Sunday afternoon
when the sky seemed to pull apart
like the innards of a cotton pillow
when we pretend is this in the past too?
life is easier than it really is
