12-29-2014, 11:17 AM
Sorry, correction. Should be "order" instead of "ordered". My mistake. Not really been feeling up to snuff lately.
Still, I think with some work this could be a decent poem. Although I have seen the motif before, it is certainly not as well worn as many.
I think it is a viable idea, that you should work on. I would encourage you to do so as it might also benefit you as far as a poet. Just my thought.
Dale
Still, I think with some work this could be a decent poem. Although I have seen the motif before, it is certainly not as well worn as many.
I think it is a viable idea, that you should work on. I would encourage you to do so as it might also benefit you as far as a poet. Just my thought.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.