Missing the internet - edit #2
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(12-29-2014, 09:05 AM)just mercedes Wrote:  milo - those line breaks were trying to chop up the lines, show groping for the words. I'll think about changing them though.
I think it can be difficult to convey groping for words.  For me, I couldn't differentiate between the deliberately poor line breaks signifying the groping and the undeliberate poor line breaks I run across on this site daily but perhaps it works for other readers.
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Missing the internet - edit #2 - by just mercedes - 12-04-2014, 02:29 PM
RE: Missing the internet - by bena - 12-05-2014, 07:02 AM
RE: Missing the internet - by crow - 12-08-2014, 04:20 PM
RE: Missing the internet - by just mercedes - 12-08-2014, 05:08 PM
RE: Missing the internet - by crow - 12-08-2014, 10:50 PM
RE: Missing the internet - edit #1 - by just mercedes - 12-09-2014, 05:42 AM
RE: Missing the internet - edit #1 - by milo - 12-09-2014, 08:03 AM
RE: Missing the internet - edit #1 - by just mercedes - 12-09-2014, 08:13 AM
RE: Missing the internet - edit #1 - by crow - 12-09-2014, 04:40 PM
RE: Missing the internet - edit #1 - by just mercedes - 12-29-2014, 09:05 AM
RE: Missing the internet - edit #2 - by milo - 12-29-2014, 09:43 AM



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