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12-27-2014, 04:28 AM
(12-26-2014, 09:34 PM)none Wrote:(12-26-2014, 03:44 AM)Leah S. Wrote: Your poem reads like the words of a song from the age of crooners. Simple songs for simple situations? The only part of it I engaged with is the play with the two meanings of 'lie'.Indeed, it's a simple situation of sexual exchange for money. Then where are the lies? |
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RE: Madeleine - by Erthona - 12-18-2014, 10:03 AM
RE: Madeleine - by none - 12-18-2014, 10:56 AM
RE: Madeleine - by Erthona - 12-19-2014, 02:51 AM
RE: Madeleine - by bena - 12-19-2014, 03:15 AM
RE: Madeleine - by none - 12-19-2014, 06:41 AM
RE: Madeleine - by Erthona - 12-19-2014, 08:21 AM
RE: Madeleine - by Leah S. - 12-21-2014, 03:05 AM
RE: Madeleine - by none - 12-23-2014, 06:35 PM
RE: Madeleine - by tectak - 12-23-2014, 07:53 PM
RE: Madeleine - by Leah S. - 12-25-2014, 03:12 AM
RE: Madeleine - by tectak - 12-25-2014, 07:41 AM
RE: Madeleine - by Leah S. - 12-26-2014, 03:44 AM
RE: Madeleine - by none - 12-23-2014, 08:14 PM
RE: Madeleine - by tectak - 12-24-2014, 12:40 AM
RE: Madeleine - by just mercedes - 12-26-2014, 04:57 AM
RE: Madeleine - by none - 12-26-2014, 09:34 PM
RE: Madeleine - by Leah S. - 12-27-2014, 02:28 AM
RE: Madeleine - by just mercedes - 12-27-2014, 04:28 AM
RE: Madeleine - by none - 12-28-2014, 08:07 AM
RE: Madeleine - by just mercedes - 12-28-2014, 08:39 AM
RE: Madeleine - by none - 12-28-2014, 08:52 AM
RE: Madeleine - by tectak - 12-31-2014, 11:41 PM
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