a young girl, limping edit #1

a young girl, limping edit #1

just mercedes
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12-23-2014, 01:50 PM

You said "All the men in the hole glared at her." but I didn't write "glare" - that's something you've supplied. I'm sorry you're uncomfortable with the idea that your body is activated by unconscious patterns. You wouldn't be human if it wasn't, though.

So it's the content of the poem, not the form of it, that bothers you?

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a young girl, limping edit #1 - by just mercedes - 12-22-2014, 04:03 AM

RE: a young girl limps - by Brownlie - 12-22-2014, 04:43 AM

RE: a young girl limps - by just mercedes - 12-22-2014, 04:53 AM

RE: a young girl limps - by Keith - 12-22-2014, 08:24 AM

RE: a young girl limps - by QDeathstar - 12-22-2014, 12:44 PM

RE: a young girl limps - by just mercedes - 12-22-2014, 01:11 PM

RE: a young girl limps - by Erthona - 12-22-2014, 04:06 PM

RE: a young girl limps - by tectak - 12-22-2014, 08:04 PM

RE: a young girl limps - by Leah S. - 12-23-2014, 03:03 AM

RE: a young girl, limping edit #1 - by just mercedes - 12-23-2014, 11:17 AM