a young girl, limping edit #1

[just mercedes]

Where is punctuation missing?

start with the first letter of the poem not being capitalized[/b] The title is also the first line of the poem, it runs on.

And what generalization did you read in the poem, please?

you might not have seen my line edits, because I didn't bold them, but the generalization in the poem is that all men are predators, at least that's the gist the poem leaves as it sits. Not that all men are predators, but that all react to signals from the unconscious brain.

Predators can be trapped by their imperatives, just as we all are.

if that is what you meant then OK, but it doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the poem to me...

Thanks for your read and comments.