Newbie's lament

[ellajam]

TecTak, Tec Tak, Mercedes too,
And Billy. Oh and yes, Leeanne....
I like this PigPen place, I do!
I braved my fear of cliquish ban!

I diligently read and  marked your work
In honest, careful, thoughful crit!
Refrained, I did, from causing irk
By posting some pre-polished bit.

So please unbend and share your worth
Ignored, bereft, I fear your mirth!

Ah what the hell, you're doing well,
you make good crit and do your bit
to make pigpen your happy home;
so keep on crittin', strut your stuff,
I for one can't get enough.
I have to make home rhyme with poem
to finish this before new year;
forgive me but, what's wrong with Leah?

Best,
tectak

It's not that she's imperious
but her fine poem in Serious
has gotten its fair share of views
with neither jarring or good news.
So Tom, come on and throw a bone,
give it a go, critique her poem.

(just to make you feel better about home/poem.)