a young girl, limping edit #1

a young girl, limping edit #1

just mercedes
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12-22-2014, 01:11 PM

Where is punctuation missing? And what generalization did you read in the poem, please?
Predators can be trapped by their imperatives, just as we all are.

Oh - the 'along' is in there for the meter as well as for repeated 'l' sounds.

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a young girl, limping edit #1 - by just mercedes - 12-22-2014, 04:03 AM

RE: a young girl limps - by Brownlie - 12-22-2014, 04:43 AM

RE: a young girl limps - by just mercedes - 12-22-2014, 04:53 AM

RE: a young girl limps - by Keith - 12-22-2014, 08:24 AM

RE: a young girl limps - by QDeathstar - 12-22-2014, 12:44 PM

RE: a young girl limps - by just mercedes - 12-22-2014, 01:11 PM

RE: a young girl limps - by Erthona - 12-22-2014, 04:06 PM

RE: a young girl limps - by tectak - 12-22-2014, 08:04 PM

RE: a young girl limps - by Leah S. - 12-23-2014, 03:03 AM

RE: a young girl, limping edit #1 - by just mercedes - 12-23-2014, 11:17 AM

RE: a young girl, limping edit #1 - by QDeathstar - 12-23-2014, 11:44 AM

RE: a young girl, limping edit #1 - by just mercedes - 12-23-2014, 12:28 PM

RE: a young girl, limping edit #1 - by QDeathstar - 12-23-2014, 12:40 PM

RE: a young girl, limping edit #1 - by just mercedes - 12-23-2014, 01:50 PM

RE: a young girl, limping edit #1 - by QDeathstar - 12-23-2014, 04:18 PM

RE: a young girl, limping edit #1 - by tectak - 12-23-2014, 05:06 PM

RE: a young girl, limping edit #1 - by QDeathstar - 12-23-2014, 09:45 PM

RE: a young girl, limping edit #1 - by just mercedes - 12-24-2014, 04:07 AM

RE: a young girl, limping edit #1 - by tectak - 12-24-2014, 04:09 AM

RE: a young girl, limping edit #1 - by just mercedes - 12-24-2014, 04:19 AM

RE: a young girl, limping edit #1 - by QDeathstar - 12-24-2014, 10:53 AM

RE: a young girl, limping edit #1 - by Leah S. - 12-25-2014, 03:05 AM

RE: a young girl, limping edit #1 - by just mercedes - 12-25-2014, 04:46 AM

RE: a young girl, limping edit #1 - by Leah S. - 12-25-2014, 05:06 AM

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