12-20-2014, 11:15 PM
lol tectak I am actually grateful for the critique, and thank you again for revisiting. :-D I get your points. Next time I'll try to organise and revise more before posting it here.
This poem has alreasy received some "wonderfully" this and beautifully that comments so I would've been satisfied by that I wouldn't have posted it here. :-)
This poem has alreasy received some "wonderfully" this and beautifully that comments so I would've been satisfied by that I wouldn't have posted it here. :-)
Ooopss sorry I don't how the above comment got posted twice, please don't kill me for this.
This poem has alreasy received some "wonderfully" this and beautifully that comments so I would've been satisfied by that I wouldn't have posted it here. :-)
This poem has alreasy received some "wonderfully" this and beautifully that comments so I would've been satisfied by that I wouldn't have posted it here. :-)
Ooopss sorry I don't how the above comment got posted twice, please don't kill me for this.