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[zahrakh]

Awake in the flame,
like lucid dreaming in hell
Intoxicating, a fragrance folded within thoughts
Sweet torment she won't let go of.
Unending visions -- waltz on swirls of passion
Fatigued soul falling in an abyss
where a desperate sightlessness surrounds.
Fingers fumbling for a hand,
only to be seared by molten betrayals.
Moments shared, togetherness; demons in saints'
clothes,
and their chants that cast her heart
into darkness.