12-17-2014, 11:52 AM
Thank you for your comments. I was getting worried I would get any, and I always love it hear what people think. I wasn't sure if I ended this in the right place. I actually had planned for this to end in a different place, but as I as writing I got side tracked. This might have worked better as a short story if only had the attention span. But you didn't find the story interesting?

