The Faceless One

[Dymun Fengshui]

I really enjoyed this poem. I only have a few suggestions.

I am the faceless one.
I have no name. I am no one. I would use a comma between the two not a period, this would make the sentence less choppy
But I know the secrets
you thought you hid.
I see the deeds
you never did.
I hear the words
you dare not speak.
I think the thoughts
you fear to seek.
I’ll be your judge
on that day to come. This line was a bit awkward, maybe some rewording
I'm taking names,
I'm leaving none.
So remember me:
I am the faceless one. I would like this better if it ended " So remember me:/ The faceless one." instead of I am the faceless one.