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12-13-2014, 11:35 PM
I love the layout of the poem. I must say though, I don't find the "clunky" sounds of the poem to be a turn off, it makes it intriguing to me.
"Whom amongst you would dare defy the dyad rite of life and death," Alliteration is rampantly abundant which is a weakness of mine! Good work |
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The Iceberg: - by Filíocht - 11-21-2014, 06:30 AM
RE: The Iceberg: - by azure - 11-22-2014, 03:03 PM
RE: The Iceberg: - by milo - 11-23-2014, 02:07 AM
RE: The Iceberg: - by Filíocht - 11-22-2014, 11:53 PM
RE: The Iceberg: - by Isaias - 11-23-2014, 12:15 AM
RE: The Iceberg: - by Filíocht - 11-23-2014, 12:50 AM
RE: The Iceberg: - by Filíocht - 11-25-2014, 04:00 AM
RE: The Iceberg: - by milo - 11-25-2014, 04:21 AM
RE: The Iceberg: - by nb - 11-25-2014, 06:32 AM
RE: The Iceberg: - by ExpressionofZero - 12-13-2014, 11:35 PM
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