12-12-2014, 06:39 PM
bgre9184 Just so you have a name for them, those rhyme patterns you don't like are called rhyming couples. It is basically a aa bb cc and so on pattern, which is what Ribo attempts here. People like it because it is the simplest rhyme pattern there is. BTW, there is a rhyming couplet at the end of Shakespearean sonnet.
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.

