12-12-2014, 07:22 AM
Thanks for your thought guys, this one's not finished yet but I don't have time to do an edit right now.
I wrote this poem after first hearing the song Dayton, Ohio 1903 by Randy Newman (and listening to it on repeat for the rest of the day), and then trying to make a poem that had the same feeling in it that I get from that song.
I wrote this poem after first hearing the song Dayton, Ohio 1903 by Randy Newman (and listening to it on repeat for the rest of the day), and then trying to make a poem that had the same feeling in it that I get from that song.