12-12-2014, 01:31 AM
Erthona,
Thank you for the output. I have done anything grammar wise to it ao far since i just wanted some critique on the actual poem. Concerning my last line that's the thing about the inferno. You can live a life of a good person, but every sin is accounted for. In Dante's tale he crosses paths with many kings and people who were praised in their formal life but were destined to eternal punishment.
Mungosmungo,
The lack of commas is due because i wasnt worrying about grammar right away as i was the actual poem. "Who think of me less" was on purpose due to the judgement all receive in the inferno. Thank you for your output. I will be working on this more.
Thank you for the output. I have done anything grammar wise to it ao far since i just wanted some critique on the actual poem. Concerning my last line that's the thing about the inferno. You can live a life of a good person, but every sin is accounted for. In Dante's tale he crosses paths with many kings and people who were praised in their formal life but were destined to eternal punishment.
Mungosmungo,
The lack of commas is due because i wasnt worrying about grammar right away as i was the actual poem. "Who think of me less" was on purpose due to the judgement all receive in the inferno. Thank you for your output. I will be working on this more.