You Have To

[billy]

hi tundra. as others have said, watch out for contraction, specially if the first word to the poem.
if i had a main concern it would be the wordiness.

And its difficult to balance a mountain on a stone
Walking blind takes faith

the quotes above read as quotes and not really like lines of a poem. merge the two or see if you can reword them, the same wit some of the other quotes.

if you read Shakespeare's soliloquy in shem's pos, you'll see that he uses a lot of imagery (slings and arrows)or (no sea untroubled)there are a lot more. and he's still able to ask the extended question. he shows us the poem, he doesn't tell us about it.

You have to

Its hard to walk the edge of a cliff [cliff's edge] would allow you to lose [of a]
Even more so with worn feet no need for [even]
And its difficult to balance a mountain on a stone no need for [and]
Walking blind takes faith
Especially after one failed attempt
The what if's become apparent,
like white chalk on a black board
To trip, to hit a wall, to step off the edge,
that would be deathly
But how deep is the pit really?
Its an unspeakable place, but is the chance worth it?
You have to trust the executioner,
well hope really, that he leaves the noose untied.