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The Artiste (inspired by 71)
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12-09-2014, 11:53 AM
I think the last six lines can go, but I think I need "what he believes looks like impressionism." That's where I understood and didn't need the rest.
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The Artiste (inspired by 71) - by Erthona - 12-08-2014, 09:03 PM
RE: The Artiste (inspired by 71) - by Eluoh - 12-09-2014, 08:13 AM
RE: The Artiste (inspired by 71) - by Erthona - 12-09-2014, 11:44 AM
RE: The Artiste (inspired by 71) - by ellajam - 12-09-2014, 11:53 AM
RE: The Artiste (inspired by 71) - by Erthona - 12-10-2014, 03:15 AM
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