Another Man's Land
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Dale, that was much needed thank you! I did use spell check, but evidently not everything was picked up (i am horrible at spelling). To me the poem seemed clear, but that is in my mind. I will have to change my word choice. Eluoh, thank your for the specifics! I'll try to have a newer version later this week... So you know what i am trying to get at with this poem. YIEKS!
--BeacherJosh
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Another Man's Land - by Beacherjosh - 12-06-2014, 12:59 PM
RE: Another Man's Land - by Erthona - 12-07-2014, 05:11 AM
RE: Another Man's Land - by Eluoh - 12-07-2014, 09:33 AM
RE: Another Man's Land - by Beacherjosh - 12-07-2014, 12:14 PM



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