12-04-2014, 09:58 PM
"between fat hands and young diamonds,
I'm too awake"
Brilliant stuff! As Rowen said, I can't find much wrong with this poem as I agree with it and I think you worded it nicely. I'm a bit of a sucker for long sentences too :-)
I'm too awake"
Brilliant stuff! As Rowen said, I can't find much wrong with this poem as I agree with it and I think you worded it nicely. I'm a bit of a sucker for long sentences too :-)