Pilate
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This poem read to me like a continues line of conscious and unconscious thought. I enjoyed that, it was like being able to read this person's mind. I have to agree with Isaias, I got the vibe that the hand washing was OCD in fashion, but also along the lines of washing your hands of sin. With this in mind, I went further into the possible metaphor that maybe he is compelled to "sin" (which I assumed the sin was something of a sexual nature) I really enjoyed this poem, but I did find following the thought process took some big leaps. It maybe a little too scattered, but manageable.
--BeacherJosh
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Pilate - by paranoid marvin - 11-20-2014, 01:49 AM
RE: Pilate - by FilĂ­ocht - 11-20-2014, 07:59 PM
RE: Pilate - by azure - 11-22-2014, 07:51 PM
RE: Pilate - by paranoid marvin - 11-22-2014, 08:31 PM
RE: Pilate - by azure - 11-22-2014, 09:08 PM
RE: Pilate - by Isaias - 11-22-2014, 11:55 PM
RE: Pilate - by jonatron5 - 11-23-2014, 03:08 PM
RE: Pilate - by lock1 - 11-24-2014, 03:38 PM
RE: Pilate - by calypist - 11-30-2014, 12:14 PM
RE: Pilate - by Beacherjosh - 12-04-2014, 11:43 AM



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