The Next One

[Beacherjosh]

I loved this piece. I thought is was going to be a generic "still stuck in love" poem, and in some ways it was, but lines like, "adjusting your backpack to your right shoulder" gave it personality which I found very appealing. For some reason I think a further plot twist at the end would be a nice touch, like you are getting your mother or relative out of jail (I'm assuming the 10,000 was bail money).