12-03-2014, 08:51 AM
Got a lot of feedback on this one very thankful ^^7 thnx thnx everyone. The first stanza was real clear to me but I could see now how it might not be to the reader. I imagine the moon bell having a ring that is so deep you can feel it vibrating/resonating with everything around you, but maybe too low to be heard. Is that sensation not being expressed or is it but it's just too abstract to make sense? Anyway I got a lot I can work on here. Working on an edit between exams >.<