Blind Desire:
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Just a question, why center justify? It makes the poem much more difficult to read. One of the few reasons that one would choose center justify is if it is a concert poem, and one was creating an image with the words relating symbolically or otherwise to the meaning of the poem, which does not seem to be happening here. I also noticed you cap the beginning of lines that are not the beginning of sentences, which also makes for difficult.

Nice quote.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Blind Desire: - by Filíocht - 11-22-2014, 11:58 PM
RE: Blind Desire: - by azure - 11-23-2014, 12:23 AM
RE: Blind Desire: - by jonatron5 - 11-23-2014, 02:55 PM
RE: Blind Desire: - by Filíocht - 12-25-2014, 12:10 AM
RE: Blind Desire: - by vagabond - 11-23-2014, 11:37 PM
RE: Blind Desire: - by Requiem - 11-27-2014, 03:29 AM
RE: Blind Desire: - by Ribo - 11-30-2014, 04:57 AM
RE: Blind Desire: - by calypist - 11-30-2014, 10:04 AM
RE: Blind Desire: - by Erthona - 11-30-2014, 11:50 AM
RE: Blind Desire: - by Beacherjosh - 12-04-2014, 11:57 AM
RE: Blind Desire: - by Filíocht - 12-05-2014, 02:57 AM
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RE: Blind Desire: - by bgre9184 - 12-12-2014, 11:03 AM
RE: Blind Desire: - by B888IE - 12-28-2014, 06:37 AM
RE: Blind Desire: - by SilvanusNath - 01-14-2015, 07:57 AM



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