11-28-2014, 04:40 AM
Hey , fitting poem for the day! 
....I was not sure reading the first paragraph where this was going and I think the poem would have had more focus to it if perhaps the first and second paragraph (that answers the first) would go together such as:
Even once the leaves have turned
I will find beauty in the branches
Even once the leaves have fallen
I will relish...etc. etc.
I thought it would be an emotional rollercoaster to express it this way.
Anyways , good job
....I was not sure reading the first paragraph where this was going and I think the poem would have had more focus to it if perhaps the first and second paragraph (that answers the first) would go together such as:Even once the leaves have turned
I will find beauty in the branches
Even once the leaves have fallen
I will relish...etc. etc.
I thought it would be an emotional rollercoaster to express it this way.
Anyways , good job