11-26-2014, 01:37 AM
(11-25-2014, 11:36 PM)rowens Wrote: It happened too quicklyThanks for the feedback! I agree about that line
A smudge of soft fur
A wild animal
Of that I was sure
A streak of orange
that just flew by
The blur in my eyes
A fox in disguise
I now had to find
this little sleek fox
I knew it had meaning
to this world where I’m lost
Slipping on faith
The Slipping on faith almost makes up for the line above it. Almost.
and holding the glimpse
Of the orange little prophet
That I’d just barely missed
So after my searching,
Off the old beaten trail
I spot an orange cat
With a fox-like tail.
The here-and-there rhyming isn't so bad in a poem like this.

