three one line poems: my attempt at monoku (title change)
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it's to imply a break pause and anything else that helps the reader see two parts to the thing. we have a fair few read ups in this forum that may help as far as haiku's go. while line length and number can or may be changed, (for me) without the seasonal word and the change in direction it's just another line of poetry. back to the dash. it isn't really needed but it does sometimes help the reader spot the break, as we all know, readers can be almost as bad as writers Hysterical

good efforts though
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RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by azure - 11-25-2014, 06:19 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 06:32 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by azure - 11-25-2014, 06:42 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 06:38 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 07:02 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by azure - 11-25-2014, 07:18 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 07:21 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by azure - 11-25-2014, 07:27 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 07:30 PM



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