three one line poems: my attempt at monoku (title change)

[azure]

are there any seasonal words? would an em dash help differentiate the clauses. are the a's needed? it works yet the three liner gives the pause acts as a visual aid and makes it easier to see the juxtaposed images.

1)

Little boy stutters- little girl


2)

blood red lone light- smoke alarm [is lone needed]?


3)

heavy night broken window- gunshot

1)


Little boy stutters little girl


2)

blood red lone light a smoke alarm


3)

heavy night broken window a gunshot

Thanks billy. I don't know much about haiku. I jumped into the form a couple days ago. I guess these were intended to be "free form" or modern haiku, thus no seasonal word. Still getting the hang of the cutting. I don't think I understand the importance of the dash that much? Is to imply a break, a pause, or help paint the picture in the reader's mind? I dunno, must do more research.