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three one line poems: my attempt at monoku (title change)

three one line poems: my attempt at monoku (title change)
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11-25-2014, 06:38 PM
missed this one. it doesn't seem to have a cut/ change of direction, would [help up] work better than tickled? though it would still need a change in direction (something like;- optical illusion)

(11-25-2014, 11:57 AM)azure Wrote:  1)

Orion's belt tickled by palm fronds
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RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by azure - 11-25-2014, 06:19 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 06:32 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by azure - 11-25-2014, 06:42 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 06:38 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 07:02 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by azure - 11-25-2014, 07:18 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 07:21 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by azure - 11-25-2014, 07:27 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 07:30 PM



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