three one line poems: my attempt at monoku (title change)

[billy]

are there any seasonal words? would an em dash help differentiate the clauses. are the a's needed? it works yet the three liner gives the pause acts as a visual aid and makes it easier to see the juxtaposed images.

1)

Little boy stutters- little girl


2)

blood red lone light- smoke alarm [is lone needed]?


3)

heavy night broken window- gunshot

1)


Little boy stutters little girl


2)

blood red lone light a smoke alarm


3)

heavy night broken window a gunshot