three one line poems: my attempt at monoku (title change)

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three one line poems: my attempt at monoku (title change)

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11-25-2014, 06:19 PM

(11-25-2014, 06:02 PM)srijantje Wrote: without "a"?

removing "a"? or adding "a"?

cliche my forte
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three one line poems: my attempt at monoku (title change) - by azure - 11-25-2014, 11:57 AM

RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by srijantje - 11-25-2014, 06:02 PM

RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by azure - 11-25-2014, 06:19 PM

RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 06:32 PM

RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by azure - 11-25-2014, 06:42 PM

RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 06:38 PM

RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 07:02 PM

RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by azure - 11-25-2014, 07:18 PM

RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 07:21 PM

RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by azure - 11-25-2014, 07:27 PM

RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 07:30 PM

RE: three one line poems: my attempt at monoku (title change) - by azure - 11-25-2014, 07:49 PM

RE: three one line poems: my attempt at monoku (title change) - by srijantje - 11-25-2014, 08:29 PM

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